Another Explode a Moment

The room was shrouded in shadowy ray-less-light. As if you could sense the despair hanging in the air.
My knee bounced in worried anticipation. My fingernails well,they were-long-gone. My eyes had found the ticking clock yet agin. My body was rigid with fear. My ears were longing for the piercing sound of a ring. Distress was clearly written across my face.
I was worried.
Worried for what the call would bring… worried for what the call would mean.
And then the dreaded moment came “ring,ring…”

One thought on “Another Explode a Moment

  1. This was an excellent post! The cadence and word choice you used gave it a very suspenseful mood that gave me chills down my spine. Good job!

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